Learning Intentions for Science
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Literacy
As part of our rocky shore unit we will also use our literacy skills to read and learn about the rocky shore and to write an information report on a rocky shore creature.
Writing
We are learning to write an information report about an animal.
We are learning to use our writing skills across the curriculum.
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Welcome to my blog. I am a student at Karoro School in Greymouth, New Zealand.
Wednesday, 4 April 2018
The Rocky Shore
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Hi David
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your recount about our trip to the rocky shore. I thought you did a great job with the visuals and with your headings. I liked your introduction because it clearly told the reader who, what, where, when and why, which is what a recount should do. I also liked how you described catching the crab and showing it to everyone. Your next step is to try and use some more interesting language. Great work.
Hi David, that was a nice piece of recounting. Yes, that was great, finding the pie crust crab. You are a good finder. It reminds me of the times you have found elephant fish egg cases, pieces of jade and two giant snail shells on our various family walks. I enjoyed reading your recount. It was a great excursion. From Mum.
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